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Script Apart Script Coverage!

Get comprehensive feedback on the latest draft of your screenplay plus one-on-one Zoom workshops with Script Apart host Al Horner

Finished a new draft of your next feature film or TV pilot and wondering what next? Got a great idea for a new story, but need a helping hand getting it onto the page? We’ve got your back! Join the countless aspiring writers and working professionals who’ve elevated their scripts based on detailed notes from professional writer and script consultant Al Horner.

It’s a fast and effective way to level up your script. Scroll down for what to expect…

Option 1

Script Feedback

Here’s what’s included…

  • An overview of the film and its premise, feeding back on how well your log line sells that premise to prospective film industry professionals

  • Are your characters captivating? Here, Al answers that question and offers suggestions if needed on how to make them stand out further

  • A detailed breakdown of where your screenplay is currently firing on all cylinders, with page-by-page references to the scenes, themes and granular moments that impress

  • If there are any plot holes, character inconsistencies or elements that could perhaps be improved upon, this is where Al will flag – with gentle suggestions as to how about go about fixing them

  • Your feedback ends with a final review and five ideas to action that can make your next draft one that wows

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Option 2

Script development

Here’s what’s included…

  • What is the meaning of the tale you’re trying to tell? Without one, your script isn’t a story – it’s just a series of events. Al will help you identify what you this is and how it’s going to drive your movie.

  • Who’s going to be the protagonist driving this story forward? And how do you make them as unique as possible – a character that feels real and relatable, no matter the genre? We’ll get into this, too.

  • What does a good structure for your story look like? What journey does your character – and the audience – need to go on, and how does that shape what your ending should look like? Let’s talk it through.

  • Your session will end with a final review of things to action so that you can start to make this film a reality.

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  • "After months of enjoying the in-depth interviews on Script Apart, I shared my script with Al—and I’m so glad I did. He came back with incredibly constructive, supportive, and sharp notes. He truly understood the story I’m trying to tell and offered clear, actionable ideas for strengthening specific scenes and character arcs. I highly recommend sharing your latest draft with Al!"

    Abigail Fuller

  • “Al Horner’s script advising is uniquely thoughtful, comprehensive, and helpful. His guidance rapidly improved my scripts and helped me grow as a writer.”

    Tania Luna

  • "Al’s feedback was honestly invaluable to me as a first-time writer. He dives into your ideas, shares his deep industry knowledge, and leaves you not only with a clear sense of next steps, but also with confidence and excitement about your project. I can’t recommend it highly enough for both rookie and experienced writers alike!"

    Imogen Reeve-Tucker

  • "Al’s coverage was incredibly valuable to me at a pivotal moment in the journey of my script. His thoughtful, incisive, and brilliantly articulated feedback allowed me to action important changes. Most crucially, Al’s passion for the work itself inspires excitement and confidence in the writer and the ambition to keep working."

    Ben Lankester

  • "Working with Al Horner was a gift. He approached my screenplay with real care, clearly understanding how personal and vulnerable this stage was for me. His notes reflected a deep grasp of the story I was trying to tell, and helped me bring it to life in my own voice. His insightful feedback moved the script forward in a way I couldn’t have done alone."

    Michael Collins

  • "After finding myself in a rut I couldn't get out of with my story, I contacted Al who offered invaluable insight to unlock the potential of my screenplay. Al really took the time to read it and see the story for what it was and what it could be. I have used Al multiple times and never regretted it."

    Bradley Scott

Interested?

Hit the icon below or email thescriptapartpodcast@gmail.com to get in touch for a quote. Flexible prices available for writers from low-income and underrepresented communities.